Say What You Do In One Sentence

The Guides: positioning, start to finish — Today’s drill is one sentence off the top of a much bigger stack. If you want the whole positioning workup, pinning down exactly who you’re for and who you wave off, the guides shelf lays it all out, free, no gate. Good place to go when the one-liner feels harder than one line should.

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The One-Sentence Pitch

One line. What you do, who it’s for. If it takes a paragraph, you’re still fishing for it.

Somebody asks what you do and you ramble for forty seconds. By the end the poor bastard knows less than when they asked. Today we cut that down to one sentence, cold, the kind a stranger can repeat to somebody else with you nowhere in the room. Get this line right and it does the work everywhere else this week.

1 // Write it in one plain sentence

Open a blank note. One line, this shape: I help [who] do [what]. Fill the brackets with words your neighbor would use. Nothing off a pitch deck. If ‘empower’ or ‘seamless’ crawls in, kill the line and start over (and yeah, naming the [who] is the part most folks fumble). Cap it at twelve words. Longer than that and you’re hiding behind adjectives.

2 // Test it on three real people

Fire that line, raw, to three folks who don’t live in your head all day. A group text does fine. Ask them one thing: what do you think I do now? Then shut up and read what comes back. Don’t jump in to explain. If one of the three asks a follow-up question, the sentence lost and you rewrite it before you touch step three.

3 // Put it where people land first

Don’t file this line away. Paste it three places today: top of your bio, the first thing on your homepage above the menu, and the opening line of your about page. First screen, before anyone scrolls. If a visitor has to hunt for what you do, they’re already gone. It lives in the first five seconds or it may as well not exist.

Say the line to a real person and stop talking. The second you reach for ‘what I mean is,’ it isn’t done, back to the note. Nail the sentence, then go paste it in all three.

THE TIP. Your one-sentence pitch and a good headline are the same muscle. Once the line’s clean, run it through the hook test: would a stranger scrolling past stop, or keep going? The Method walks the whole build from that first sentence to a page that converts, and it costs nothing. The Method (free)

DEAD AIR

Every operative gets a number when they sign on. We’re up to two hundred sixteen. This morning a reply came in from two hundred seventeen. The message was blank. Nobody has been assigned that number yet. I left it in the outbox.

Reply with your one sentence. Just the line, nothing under it, no ‘what I mean is.’ I’ll read every one and tell you straight whether a stranger would get it. ~ J.D.